8.RP.1.1

Kayla M. May 9, 2012 9:07 PM Positive Review
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I like how she organized the data an how at the end she cited her work so that I could go back and see where she got her information. She had a lot of good things to say about the topic. She also gave us the history of tobacco which is what I really like and how it affects us. I think that this paper is really good.

Negative Review

Some of the words she used were a little hard to understand. I didn’t really understand the flue-curing I think she may want to explain that a little more. Other than that I thought her paper was good.

My Response

Thank you for reading my paper. I am glad you enjoyed it and liked my history on tobacco. Thank you for properly critiquing me and not be rude about it. Thank you for the hint that I should explain a few more things and use simpler words.

Kyla Clark 5-9-12 11:14 am

Student Review Positive

It was well written. It had good information. The history section was very interesting to me. To me she touched some major hazords.

Negative

Under cultivation it was slightly diffucult for me to understand. Under curing she might have wanted to think about seaperating the subtitles that are under the main subtitle. Possibly could have add or underlined them.

My Response

Thank you for reading my paper. I am glad you believe I had good information that let you learn more about and the history of tobacco. I should have thought to make the subtitles stand out so you actually knew the new topic that is an excelllent idea. Thank you for your suggestions.